[netmod] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 14 July 2021 21:55 UTC

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Subject: [netmod] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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In Section 7:

"... number of requests that is served to a client ..." -- s/is/are/

Also, it strikes me that some of what's in Section 7 is repeated in the last
paragraph of Section 9.  I wonder if they could perhaps be merged, or 9 could
reference 7, or something.

[netmod] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Re: [netmod] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on d… Alexander L Clemm