Re: [netmod] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-07: (with COMMENT)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 07 June 2017 12:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-07: (with COMMENT)
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On 6/7/2017 12:13 AM, Adam Roach wrote:
> Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-07: No Objection
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> I'm not going to pick out a bike shed color, but I do support the assertions
> that "module type" is a bit too ambiguous. When I got to section 3, I had to go
> back to see what section 2 called its things, because "type" is so generic.
What about
OLD: 3. Second Dimension: Module Types
NEW: 3. Second Dimension: Module Origin Types
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> There are some places where the unexpanded acronyms lost me (VRF, MEF, UNI) --
Ack.
Note: MEF is not an acronym any longer since they want to move away from 
the narrow scope of Metro Ethernet

Regards, B.
> consider expanding these on first use.
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