Re: [netmod] WGLC: draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-04

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Sat, 28 March 2020 12:39 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
CC: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] WGLC: draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-04
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from: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
Sent: 27 March 2020 17:37
Hi Tom,

Not questioning the Not Ready status for the overall draft, but on the issues you raise about the yang model ...

<tp>
Mahesh
see my reply to Christian - I think I have covered the points that you raise except why the tools do not give you a warning about them!
tom petch

> On Mar 27, 2020, at 10:09 AM, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
>
> Kent
>
> Not Ready
>
> I thought that so obvious that it was not worth saying:-)
>
> e.g.
> IANA considerations does not register the namespace so there is no module
> Security Considerations does not use template (which other grouping modules such as Kent's do)
> No YANG version

Which version statement were you referring to? There is one in the model with the date 2019-02-17.

> Wrong prefix for ietf-yang-types

Does the prefix have to be the same as what the model declares? None of the tools complain about it.

> No reference clause for yang types

Yes, as pointed out in the review.

> A wholesale lack of YANG reference clauses; perhaps half a dozen needed
> No Normative reference for yang-types

Yes, as pointed out in the review.

> Insufficient information for IANA - I infer they are being asked to create a registry but details seem lacking compared to the requirements in RFC8126
>
> At which point I stop and await a fresh revision before having another go.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ________________________________________
> From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
> Sent: 26 March 2020 18:46
>
> Dear All,
>
> This WGLC has received zero responses, which is insufficient to progress the document at this time.  The WGLC is therefore being extended  for another week, now ending April 1st (the day before our Virtual Meeting on April 2nd).
>
> Again, positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcomed.  This is useful and important, even from authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.
>
> FWIW, the YANG Doctor review was completed on 3/23 (thanks Mahesh) with the “Ready with Nits” status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-geo-location-04-yangdoctors-lc-jethanandani-2020-03-23.
>
> Kent // as shepherd and co-chair
>
>
>
> On Mar 9, 2020, at 6:30 PM, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>> wrote:
>
> This message begins an almost two-week WGLC for draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-04 ending on March 22nd (the day before the NETMOD sessions).  Here is a direct link to the HTML version of the draft:
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-04
>
> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!  This is useful and important, even from authors. Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.
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