Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Mon, 18 December 2017 21:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
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On 12/18/2017 04:01 PM, Andy Bierman wrote:
> 
> 
> On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 12:56 PM, Juergen Schoenwaelder
> <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de
> <mailto:j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>> wrote:
> 
>     On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 03:35:55PM -0500, Lou Berger wrote:
>     >
>     > Given the context (YANG module, and this WG), I think it should be
>     > 6087bis (which is the same as 6087 in this respect).
> 
>     Does RFC 6087 formally update RFC 3688?
> 
> 
> Not intentionally.
> The 3688 text  should probably be used instead of 6087bis.
> 
yikes.  really? so you think rfc6087 and the netmod RFCs were wrong?

Thanks,
Lou

> 
> Andy
> 
> 
> 
>        Registrant Contact
>           The individual/organization that is the registration contact for
>           the component being registered.  Ideally, this will be the name
>           and pertinent physical and network contact information.  In the
>           case of IETF developed standards, the Registrant will be the IESG.
> 
>     /js
> 
>     > I'll put in the publication request as soon as this update is made.
>     >
>     > > Interestingly, it seems the "Registrant Contact" is not stored
>     in the
>     > > IANA maintained registry...
>     > >
>     >
>     > true.
>     >
>     > Thanks,
>     > Lou
>     >
>     > > /martin
>     > >
>     > >
>     > >> Lou
>     > >>
>     > >>
>     > >>> /js
>     > >>>
>     > >>> On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 03:00:26PM -0500, Lou Berger wrote:
>     > >>>> Martin, Authors,
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>> is there a reason that the draft says:
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>>         Registrant Contact: The IESG.
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>> vs the typical:
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>>        Registrant Contact: The NETMOD WG of the IETF.
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>> Thanks,
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>> Lou
>     > >>>>
>     > >>>> On 12/18/2017 4:39 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote:
>     > >>>>> Hi,
>     > >>>>>
>     > >>>>> This version addresses the WGLC comments received. 
>     Specifically, I
>     > >>>>> have added ietf-hardware-state, a config false version of
>     > >>>>> ietf-hardware for non-NMDA implementations, in an Appendix. 
>     Please
>     > >>>>> review the new text and the description statement in that
>     module.
>     > >>>>>
>     > >>>>> I have also added a reference to the tree diagram draft and
>     use the
>     > >>>>> latest security guidelines template text.
>     > >>>>>
>     > >>>>>
>     > >>>>> /martin
>     > >>>>>
>     > >>>>> internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>     wrote:
>     > >>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
>     Internet-Drafts directories.
>     > >>>>>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the
>     IETF.
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Hardware
>     Management
>     > >>>>>>         Authors         : Andy Bierman
>     > >>>>>>                           Martin Bjorklund
>     > >>>>>>                           Jie Dong
>     > >>>>>>                           Dan Romascanu
>     > >>>>>>        Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
>     > >>>>>>        Pages           : 54
>     > >>>>>>        Date            : 2017-12-18
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> Abstract:
>     > >>>>>>    This document defines a YANG data model for the
>     management of
>     > >>>>>>    hardware on a single server.
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     > >>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-entity/
>     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-entity/>
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     > >>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>     <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
>     > >>>>>>
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     > >>>>>>
>     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>     <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the
>     time of submission
>     > >>>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at
>     tools.ietf.org <http://tools.ietf.org>.
>     > >>>>>>
>     > >>>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>     > >>>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>     <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/>
>     > >>>>>>
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