Re: [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-yang-library-01

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Mon, 30 March 2020 10:10 UTC

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There is quite a lot wrong with the admin of the YANG-library I-D when compared with RFC8407 IMHO

Security considerations does not conform to boiler plate

IANA considerations does not register name space

RFC 6991  is imported and so MUST be a Normative reference

ietf-sid-file is imported and so MUST be a Normative  not Informative reference for the I-D

reference ietf-core-sid would be better as RFC YYYY with an RFC Editor note asking them to replace YYYY with the number assigned to 'YANG Schema ...

Organization Netconf WG seems an odd choice and contradicts contact details

Contact does not normally specify WG Chairs 

more than one revision clause

CORECONF not an abbreviation I recognise

I will look some more as and when these are addressed (or I see IETF Last Call:-)

Tom Petch
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From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
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Subject: [netmod] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12, -sid-11, -comi-09, -yang-library-01

It took us a long time to get the four CORECONF drafts in sync,
but now we are ready for WGLC.

This starts a working group last call for
— draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12
— draft-ietf-core-sid-11
— draft-ietf-core-comi-09
— draft-ietf-core-yang-library-01

ending on

        24:00 UTC on Tuesday, March 31, 2020.

(This includes some extra time for the IETF week and for cross-WG
coordination.)

This WGLC is copied to the netmod WG mailing list; please do have a look
at these drafts as they are slated to become a part of the greater
YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF family.  We intend the discussion to be on the
CoRE mailing list, but if you find a fundamental issue with YANG or
RESTCONF, feel free to discuss that on netmod instead.

Please start a new email thread for each major issue that will need
discussion and make sure the subject line includes the draft name and
some sort of name for the issue.  (Minor issues such as typos can also
be sent to the authors.)

If you read the draft and think it looks fine, please send a one line
email to the list or to the chairs letting us know that so we can get
a feel of how broad the review has been.

(To reviewers and authors:)  If you are aware of any patent claims that
might apply to systems that implement these drafts, please review BCP 78
and BCP 79 and make any appropriate IPR declaration before the last-call
ends. If you are not sure whether you need to make a declaration or not,
please talk to the chairs and we will help.

Grüße, Carsten

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