[netmod] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-09: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 12 July 2021 13:37 UTC

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Subject: [netmod] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-09: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to Alexey Melnikov for the SECDIR review.

** Section 4.  “differences” bullet.  Per “… defined in RFC8072”, please make
“RFC8072” an reference.

** Section 6.  Please review Alexey’s feedback on providing an empty line
between the HTTP header and playload.

** Section 6.  “same request in RESTCONF (using JSON format)”.  Missing “:”
making the JSON invalid.

OLD
   { "ietf-nmda-compare:input" {

NEW
   { "ietf-nmda-compare:input": {

** Section 9.  The primary new security issue is definitely the possibility of
a denial of service as is documented.  I’m not sure what assumption are being
made about the datastores -- would it be possible that a user doesn’t have read
access to either the source and target of the comparison, but would be able to
invoke the RPC?  If so, this might leak configuration information.

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