Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt

[Lou Berger <[e-mail]>]

Hi Kent, Authors,

Sorry for the delay in processing this.  WRT your comments, see below:

On 6/27/2019 5:35 PM, Kent Watsen wrote:
>
> This update primarily regards the non-normative script:
>
>     - renamed to "rfcfold"
>     - now only uses sed one-liners
>     - auto-detects if platforms `[g]sed` and `pcregrep` are present and
>        suitable, outputting an error message if not.
>     - cleans up the temporary directory if exits for any reason
>     - improved error message around the script not implementing the
>       force-fold logic.
>
>     Special thanks to Eric Auerswald for supplying the pull requests
>     for much of the above!
>
>
> Outside the updates to the script:
>
>     - renamed 9.3:
>           OLD: Example Showing Smart Folding
>           NEW: Example Showing "Smart" Folding
>
>     - renamed Appendix A:
>           OLD: POSIX Shell Script: rfcfold
>           NEW: POSIX Shell Script
>
>
> My only comments are:
>
>     1) the script itself doesn't name itself "rfcfold" anywhere.
>             - albeit, the "name" attribute in the XML is set to "rfcfold".

I think adding a name would be good -- but this is a non-blocking comment.

>
>     2) if the script is expected to be distributed, we may want/need to
>         add a copyright statement and/or a pointer to its GitHub repo.
>
>
I believe the trust requires a specific license in all code segments in 
RFCs, see https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm section 
4.  I think this needs to be added before the document can be submitted 
for publication.

Thanks,

Lou

(as Shepherd)


> Thanks,
> Kent
>
>
>> On Jun 27, 2019, at 5:20 PM, [e-mail] 
>> <mailto:[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
>>
>>        Title           : Handling Long Lines in Inclusions in 
>> Internet-Drafts and RFCs
>>        Authors         : Kent Watsen
>>                          Adrian Farrel
>>                          Qin Wu
>> Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt
>> Pages           : 26
>> Date            : 2019-06-27
>>
>> Abstract:
>>   This document defines two strategies for handling long lines in
>>   width-bounded text content.  One strategy is based on the historic
>>   use of a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-
>>   folding has occurred, with the continuation occurring with the first
>>   non-space (' ') character on the next line.  The second strategy
>>   extends the first strategy by adding a second backslash character to
>>   identify where the continuation begins and thereby able to handle
>>   cases not supported by the first strategy.  Both strategies use a
>>   self-describing header enabling automated reconstitution of the
>>   original content.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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