Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08.txt

Hi,

"Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com> wrote:
>  On Dec 4, 2019, at 22:37, Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> wrote:
> 
>  v-08 is posted to address comments received from YANG doctor review and
>  additional comments from Joe.
>  The diff is:
>  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08
> 
> Thanks, Qin. But this isn’t actually what I had in mind. I was suggesting text targeted at
> implementors but also warning operators along the lines of:
> 
> Operators should be aware that since all read-write datastores are
> immediately reset to 
> factor default, the device will become unreachable on the network.

s/will/may/

( and s/factor/factory/ )

> One should
> understand how a given vendor’s device will behave after the RPC is executed.

Perhaps s/One should/It is important to/?

> Implementors SHOULD reboot the device or otherwise restart processes needed to
> bootstrap it.
> 
> I realize Jürgen(?) or others had problems with calling out
> bootstrapping, but I do think
> some explicit advice is required so all parties are aware what the
> impact of executing the 
> RPC would have.

I had concerns with the previous text about bootstrapping, but I think
that your proposed text above is fine.

/martin

> 
> Joe
> 
>  -Qin
>  -----邮件原件-----
>  发件人: I-D-Announce [mailto:i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org] 代表
>  internet-drafts@ietf.org
>  发送时间: 2019年12月5日 11:36
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>  抄送: netmod@ietf.org
>  主题: I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08.txt
> 
>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
> 
>  Title : Factory Default Setting
>  Authors : Qin Wu
>  Balazs Lengyel
>  Ye Niu
>  Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08.txt
>  Pages : 11
>  Date : 2019-12-04
> 
>  Abstract:
>  This document defines a method to reset a server to its factory-
>  default content. The reset operation may be used, e.g., when the
>  existing configuration has major errors so re-starting the
>  configuration process from scratch is the best option.
> 
>  A new factory-reset RPC is defined. When resetting a datastore, all
>  previous configuration settings will be lost and replaced by the
>  factory-default content.
> 
>  A new optional "factory-default" read-only datastore is defined, that
>  contains the data that will be copied over to the running datastore
>  at reset.
> 
>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default/
> 
>  There are also htmlized versions available at:
>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08
> 
>  A diff from the previous version is available at:
>  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-08
> 
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