Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5642)

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Wed, 27 February 2019 16:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5642)
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Note: I just released this this email.  

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> On Feb 21, 2019, at 1:06 PM, Peter Loborg <peter.loborg@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
>  
> Your example is fine – but the gammar is ch14 specifies something different:
>  
> enum-stmt           = enum-keyword sep string optsep
>                          (";" /
>                           "{" stmtsep
>                               ;; these stmts can appear in any order
>                               *if-feature-stmt
>                               [value-stmt]
>                               [status-stmt]
>                               [description-stmt]
>                               [reference-stmt]
>                            "}") stmtsep
>  
> It clearly states  string, not quoted-string. These two have the following rules:
>  
> quoted-string       = (DQUOTE string DQUOTE) / (SQUOTE string SQUOTE)
>  
> string              = < an unquoted string, as returned by >
>                          < the scanner, that matches the rule >
>                          < yang-string >
>  
> …and in 6.1.3 we can read that:
>    An unquoted string is any sequence of characters that does not
>    contain any space, tab, carriage return, or line feed characters, a
>    single or double quote character, a semicolon (";"), braces ("{" or
>    "}"), or comment sequences ("//", "/*", or "*/").
>  
>    Note that any keyword can legally appear as an unquoted string.
>  
> Since the section so clearly writes about single quoted strings and double quoted strings, there can unfortunately be no interpretation that would allow “identifier” to be called an unquoted string – even though it follows the rules about limited character contents.
>  
> Hence – this is not a matter of opinion – it’s a matter of reading what’s actually written in the RFC.
>  
> But on the subject of opinion…
>  
>       enum "This is also legal";   // should definitely always be illegal
>  
> …as we cannot create a language binding to enum constructs in any major programming languages.
>  
> Br,
> Peter
>  
>  
> From: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com <mailto:andy@yumaworks.com>> 
> Sent: den 21 februari 2019 18:45
> To: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com <mailto:mbj@tail-f.com>>
> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>>; Ignas Bagdonas <ibagdona@gmail.com <mailto:ibagdona@gmail.com>>; NetMod WG <netmod@ietf.org <mailto:netmod@ietf.org>>; Peter Loborg <peter.loborg@ericsson.com <mailto:peter.loborg@ericsson.com>>; Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net <mailto:warren@kumari.net>>
> Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5642)
>  
>  
>  
> On Thu, Feb 21, 2019 at 8:53 AM Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com <mailto:mbj@tail-f.com>> wrote:
> RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote:
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7950,
> > "The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language".
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5642 <http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5642>
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Peter Loborg <peter.loborg@ericsson.com <mailto:peter.loborg@ericsson.com>>
> > 
> > Section: 9.6.4
> > 
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> > It takes as an argument a string that is the assigned name. 
> > 
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> > It takes as an argument an unquoted string that is the assigned name.
> 
> This is not correct.  The enum argument is not different from any
> other keyword's arguments in YANG.  See e.g. the example in 9.12.4:
> 
>        type enumeration {
>          enum "unbounded";
>        }
> 
> The following is also legal:
> 
>          enum "unb" + 'ounded';
> 
> 
>  
>  
>   enum "This is also legal";
>  
> 9.6.4.  The "enum" Statement
>  
>    The "enum" statement, which is a substatement to the "type"
>    statement, MUST be present if the type is "enumeration".  It is
>    repeatedly used to specify each assigned name of an enumeration type.
>    It takes as an argument a string that is the assigned name.  The
>    string MUST NOT be zero-length and MUST NOT have any leading or
>    trailing whitespace characters (any Unicode character with the
>    "White_Space" property).  The use of Unicode control codes SHOULD be
>    avoided.
>  
>  
> This errata should be rejected.
> 
> 
> 
> /martin
> 
>  
>  
> Andy
>  
> 
> > 
> > Notes
> > -----
> > Readers are not beeing made aware that careful reading of section 6.1.3 and the detailed definition of string in section 14 must be consulted.
> > For comming versions of this RFC it would be preferable to use a more specialized grammar token for these cases (e.g. unquoted-string).
> > 
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party  
> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC7950 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-14)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language
> > Publication Date    : August 2016
> > Author(s)           : M. Bjorklund, Ed.
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Network Modeling
> > Area                : Operations and Management
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> > 
> 
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