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Re: [netmod] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: (with COMMENT)

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Thu, 25 January 2018 16:48 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Suresh Krishnan <suresh@kaloom.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Suresh, 

Thanks for the review - see inline. 

On 1/24/18, 10:43 AM, "Suresh Krishnan" <suresh@kaloom.com> wrote:

    Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09: No Objection
    
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    * Lots of places in the document where NMDA is misspelled as NDMA. Please fix.

I'm hardwired to type "N-D" - you can take the boy out of North Dakota but you can't the North Dakota out of the boy... I've fixed all these. 


    
    * Section 9.1.
    
    The ranges for AdvDefaultLifetime and MaxRtrAdvInterval have been changed by
    RFC-to-be-8319 to update the values specified in RFC4861.  Please change these
    ranges to the new values.
    
    OLD:
    
    leaf max-rtr-adv-interval {
               type uint16 {
                 range "4..1800";
               }
    
    NEW:
    
    leaf max-rtr-adv-interval {
               type uint16 {
                 range "4..65535";
               }
    
    OLD:
    
             leaf default-lifetime {
               type uint16 {
                 range "0..9000";
               }
    
    NEW:
             leaf default-lifetime {
               type uint16 {
                 range "0..65535";
               }
    
    Good point, these changes will be in th -10 version. 

Thanks,
Acee

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