Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 04 October 2018 12:35 UTC

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To: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>
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From: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11
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I had thought we had discussed sufficient edits.  When I looked at the 
diff, what I saw helped some, but still left me concerned.
Yours,
Joel

On 10/4/18 6:06 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
>> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
>> Review result: Ready with Issues
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
>> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-??
>> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
>> Review Date: 2018-10-03
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11
>>
>> Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication
>> as a proposed standard.
>>
>> Major issues:
>>      It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been
>>      involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite
>>      unclear and confusing.   For somewhat more details, please see my previous
>>      review at
>>      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/
> 
> I'm sorry to hear that you find it confusing.  I was under the
> impression that the edits that we made after your previous review were
> sufficient.
> 
> 
> /martin
> 
> 
> 
>>
>> Minor issues:
>>      N/A
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>      N/A
>>
>>
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