Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-20

Kent, Tom, Yaron, and Ron,

A new version of the draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model has been published that addresses your concerns.

Thanks,

Clyde

On 2/20/18, 9:06 AM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen" <netmod-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of kwatsen@juniper.net> wrote:

    > Kent
    > 
    > You illustrate beautifully the problem I would like a solution to.
    >
    > The current thinking AFAICT is that tree-diagrams
    > should be an Informative Reference.
    >
    > Therefore, the RFC Editor will not hold publication until an RFC number
    > is assigned.
    > 
    > Therefore, a note asking the I-D reference to be updated to reflect the
    > assigned RFC number is null - the RFC can be published with the
    > reference as an i-d and not as an RFC which is what I expect the RFC
    > Editor to do.
    > 
    > QED

    Except I know that this draft will be stuck in MISREF state and tree-diagrams
    will in fact be assigned an RFC number by the time this draft is published.

    K.

    > Note that this is not the case of a Normative i-d reference being buried
    > in the YANG module and not being.noticed by the RFC Editor; that problem
    > I am content with.
    >
    >
    >Tom Petch

    >
    > Please also address these issues when posting -21 to address Benoit's
    issues.  Please post -21 ASAP as Benoit has already placed this draft on
    the IESG telechat in a couple weeks.
    >
    > Thanks,
    > Kent // shepherd
    >
    >
    > On 2/14/18, 8:18 AM, "netmod on behalf of Benoit Claise"
    <netmod-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:netmod-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of
    bclaise@cisco.com<mailto:bclaise@cisco.com>> wrote:
    >
    > Dear all,
    >
    > - the draft is NMDA compliant, right? It should be mentioned.
    > Ex: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03, in the abstract and intro
    >
    >    The YANG model in this document conforms to the Network Management
    >
    >    Datastore Architecture defined in
    I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores.
    >
    >
    > - As mentioned in the writeup, [I-D.ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams]
    should be an informative reference, not normative.
    >
    > - Editorial:
    > OLD:
    > This draft addresses the common leafs
    > NEW:
    > This document addresses the common leafs
    >
    > Please publish a new version asap.
    > In the mean time, I'm sending this draft to IETF LC.
    >
    > Regards, Benoit
    >
    >
    >

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