Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Mon, 18 December 2017 20:01 UTC

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To: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>, draft-ietf-netmod-entity@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
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Martin, Authors,

is there a reason that the draft says:

        Registrant Contact: The IESG.

vs the typical:

       Registrant Contact: The NETMOD WG of the IETF.

Thanks,

Lou

On 12/18/2017 4:39 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote:
> Hi,
>
> This version addresses the WGLC comments received.  Specifically, I
> have added ietf-hardware-state, a config false version of
> ietf-hardware for non-NMDA implementations, in an Appendix.  Please
> review the new text and the description statement in that module.
>
> I have also added a reference to the tree diagram draft and use the
> latest security guidelines template text.
>
>
> /martin
>
> internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Hardware Management
>>         Authors         : Andy Bierman
>>                           Martin Bjorklund
>>                           Jie Dong
>>                           Dan Romascanu
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
>> 	Pages           : 54
>> 	Date            : 2017-12-18
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document defines a YANG data model for the management of
>>    hardware on a single server.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-entity/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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