Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt

["t.petch" <[e-mail]>]

Clyde

I like the introduction of yyyy and zzzz;  but I still hanker after
Normative References to I-Ds,  draft-ietf-netconf-keystore and
draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server.  I think that they are required.

Also, in -15  and in -16, the line length seems to have gone wrong and
is now too long; I notice it in the Description clauses.  It was ok
in -13.

"           Each line must be limited to 72 characters followed by the
           character sequence that denotes an end-of-line (EOL).  This
           limit includes any left-side indentation.
"

Tom Petch


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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Syslog Configuration
>         Authors         : Clyde Wildes
>                           Kiran Koushik
> Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt
> Pages           : 30
> Date            : 2017-08-11
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of a
>    syslog process.  It is intended this model be used by vendors who
>    implement syslog in their systems.
>
> Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
>
>    This draft contains many placeholder values that need to be
replaced
>    with finalized values at the time of publication.  This note
>    summarizes all of the substitutions that are needed.  No other RFC
>    Editor instructions are specified elsewhere in this document.
>
>    Artwork in this document contains shorthand references to drafts in
>    progress.  Please apply the following replacements:
>
>    o  "xxxx" --> the assigned RFC value for
draft-ietf-netconf-keystore
>
>    o  "yyyy" --> the assigned RFC value for draft-ietf-netconf-tls-
>       client-server
>
>    o  "zzzz" --> the assigned RFC value for this draft
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>
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>
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