Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt

Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com> Mon, 18 December 2017 21:11 UTC

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From: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Dec 2017 13:11:07 -0800
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To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
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On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 1:03 PM, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:

> On 12/18/2017 04:01 PM, Andy Bierman wrote:
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 12:56 PM, Juergen Schoenwaelder
> > <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de
> > <mailto:j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>> wrote:
> >
> >     On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 03:35:55PM -0500, Lou Berger wrote:
> >     >
> >     > Given the context (YANG module, and this WG), I think it should be
> >     > 6087bis (which is the same as 6087 in this respect).
> >
> >     Does RFC 6087 formally update RFC 3688?
> >
> >
> > Not intentionally.
> > The 3688 text  should probably be used instead of 6087bis.
> >
> yikes.  really? so you think rfc6087 and the netmod RFCs were wrong?
>
>
Not wrong, but the more generic text applies to all WGs,
not just NETMOD WG.  The YANG module contact info
has the WG details. Since the NETMOD WG is long-lived,
it may be better to list NETMOD WG.  It doesn't seem to matter
since this info is not in the registry anyway.




> Thanks,
> Lou
>


Andy


>
> >
> > Andy
> >
> >
> >
> >        Registrant Contact
> >           The individual/organization that is the registration contact
> for
> >           the component being registered.  Ideally, this will be the name
> >           and pertinent physical and network contact information.  In the
> >           case of IETF developed standards, the Registrant will be the
> IESG.
> >
> >     /js
> >
> >     > I'll put in the publication request as soon as this update is made.
> >     >
> >     > > Interestingly, it seems the "Registrant Contact" is not stored
> >     in the
> >     > > IANA maintained registry...
> >     > >
> >     >
> >     > true.
> >     >
> >     > Thanks,
> >     > Lou
> >     >
> >     > > /martin
> >     > >
> >     > >
> >     > >> Lou
> >     > >>
> >     > >>
> >     > >>> /js
> >     > >>>
> >     > >>> On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 03:00:26PM -0500, Lou Berger wrote:
> >     > >>>> Martin, Authors,
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>> is there a reason that the draft says:
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>>         Registrant Contact: The IESG.
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>> vs the typical:
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>>        Registrant Contact: The NETMOD WG of the IETF.
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>> Thanks,
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>> Lou
> >     > >>>>
> >     > >>>> On 12/18/2017 4:39 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote:
> >     > >>>>> Hi,
> >     > >>>>>
> >     > >>>>> This version addresses the WGLC comments received.
> >     Specifically, I
> >     > >>>>> have added ietf-hardware-state, a config false version of
> >     > >>>>> ietf-hardware for non-NMDA implementations, in an Appendix.
> >     Please
> >     > >>>>> review the new text and the description statement in that
> >     module.
> >     > >>>>>
> >     > >>>>> I have also added a reference to the tree diagram draft and
> >     use the
> >     > >>>>> latest security guidelines template text.
> >     > >>>>>
> >     > >>>>>
> >     > >>>>> /martin
> >     > >>>>>
> >     > >>>>> internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> >     wrote:
> >     > >>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
> >     Internet-Drafts directories.
> >     > >>>>>> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the
> >     IETF.
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Hardware
> >     Management
> >     > >>>>>>         Authors         : Andy Bierman
> >     > >>>>>>                           Martin Bjorklund
> >     > >>>>>>                           Jie Dong
> >     > >>>>>>                           Dan Romascanu
> >     > >>>>>>        Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06.txt
> >     > >>>>>>        Pages           : 54
> >     > >>>>>>        Date            : 2017-12-18
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> Abstract:
> >     > >>>>>>    This document defines a YANG data model for the
> >     management of
> >     > >>>>>>    hardware on a single server.
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >     > >>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-entity/
> >     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-entity/>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> >     > >>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
> >     <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
> >     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06
> >     <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-entity-06>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the
> >     time of submission
> >     > >>>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at
> >     tools.ietf.org <http://tools.ietf.org>.
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> >     > >>>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >     <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/>
> >     > >>>>>>
> >     > >>>>>> _______________________________________________
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> >     > >>>>>>
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