Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Wed, 10 January 2018 16:18 UTC

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Date: Wed, 10 Jan 2018 17:18:13 +0100
From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
To: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 07:00:18AM -0800, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 5:15 AM, Juergen Schoenwaelder <
> j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> wrote:
> 
> > On Mon, Jan 08, 2018 at 05:05:09AM -0800, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> > >
> > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > > COMMENT:
> > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > >
> > >
> > >       protocol interactions with other systems and that is neither
> > >       conventional nor dynamic configuration.
> > > Could you provide an example of this?
> >
> > Many DHCP implementations do not go through a dynamic datastore and
> > deliver configuration state straight into the operational state. An IP
> > address learned via DHCP on such a system will be tagged with
> > or:learned.
> >
> 
> I don't think it's imperative, but it would be nice to have this example in
> the
> text.

There is more explanatory text in section 5.3.4 and I believe this
should be sufficient:

   o  learned: represents configuration that has been learned via
      protocol interactions with other systems, including protocols such
      as link-layer negotiations, routing protocols, DHCP, etc.

/js

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