Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03.txt

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Mon, 17 June 2019 20:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03.txt
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OK, we’re agreed on what we want to achieve, just not on the wording to describe it 😊

 

How about…

 

   1.  Determine where the fold will occur.  This location MUST be

       before or at the desired maximum column, and MUST NOT be chosen

       such that the character immediately after the fold is a space

       (' ') character.  If no such location can be found, then exit

       (this text content cannot be folded)

 

Best,

Adrian

 

From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> 
Sent: 17 June 2019 19:53
To: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03.txt

 

Hi Adrian,

 

Text suggestions welcomed.   

 

What needs to be expressed is that a space character cannot occupy the column where the end-of-line '\' is to placed, as doing so would push that space character to the beginning of the next line, which the unfolding logic would subsequently delete, thinking that it was part of a user-placed "indent".  Makes sense?

 

Kent

 





On Jun 17, 2019, at 2:16 PM, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk <mailto:adrian@olddog.co.uk> > wrote:

 

Kent, 

Thanks for the work.

 

I had a clear understanding of what “precede a space” means.

I struggle to understand what “on top of” means in a stream of characters. I wondered whether you were referring to vertical placement on the page (the text is talking about columns), but that seems crazy!

Do you mean that the fold must not be occupied by a space character?

I think the question is whether it is easier to describe a fold happening between characters or at a character slot.

The original text used the “between characters” approach. If you prefer to say you fold at a column, that’s fine, but probably “on top of” isn’t as clear as “the column at which we fold must not contain a space”.

 

Best,

Adrian

 

 

From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:netmod-bounces@ietf.org> > On Behalf Of Kent Watsen
Sent: 17 June 2019 18:39
To: netmod@ietf.org <mailto:netmod@ietf.org> 
Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03.txt

 

 

I just posted an Editorial update that only touches the non-normative script to add a -q (quiet) flag.  Here's the diff:  <https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-04.txt> https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-04.txt.

 

Separately, it's been more than two weeks since the below message.   There has been no comments on #2 below, and so the chairs can more forward with the publishing request now?

 

Kent // author (recused chair)

 

 






On May 30, 2019, at 10:41 AM, Kent Watsen < <mailto:kent@watsen.net> kent@watsen.net> wrote:

 

 

This update reflects the changes discussed during the Last Call plus the following additional changes:

 

  1) s/see if any/ensure at least one/  (EDITORIAL: sounded too casual before)

  2) s/MUST NOT precede a space (' ') character/MUST NOT be on top of a space (' ') character/  (TECHNICAL: see below)

  3) wrapped the script with <CODE BEGINS> and <CODE ENDS> (EDITORIAL, per idnits)

 

Regarding #2, this change was made after I examined the algorithm more carefully.  It would be good for others to confirm this rather critical change.

 

Thanks,

Kent // contributor

 

 






On May 30, 2019, at 10:30 AM,  <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

 


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.

       Title           : Handling Long Lines in Inclusions in Internet-Drafts and RFCs
       Authors         : Kent Watsen
                         Adrian Farrel
                         Qin Wu
   Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03.txt
       Pages           : 25
       Date            : 2019-05-30

Abstract:
  This document defines two strategies for handling long lines in
  width-bounded text content.  One strategy is based on the historic
  use of a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-
  folding has occurred, with the continuation occurring with the first
  non-space (' ') character on the next line.  The second strategy
  extends the first strategy by adding a second backslash character to
  identify where the continuation begins and thereby able to handle
  cases not supported by the first strategy.  Both strategies use a
  self-describing header enabling automated reconstitution of the
  original content.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/

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 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03
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A diff from the previous version is available at:
 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-03


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