Re: [netmod] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Thu, 11 January 2018 08:20 UTC

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Date: Thu, 11 Jan 2018 09:20:07 +0100
From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
To: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 11:50:30PM -0800, Adam Roach wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> The examples in Appendix C use IP addresses from RFC1918 ranges rather than
> addresses from those blocks reserved for documentation. At the same time,
> current IAB guidance <https://www.iab.org/2016/11/07/iab-statement-on-ipv6/>
> calls for IPv6 examples in current standards-track documents. Consequently, I
> would suggest replacing "10.1.2.3" with "2001:DB8::BEEF:FACE" (or your favorite
> address from 2001:DB8::/32) everywhere.
> 

I will replaced 10.1.2.3 with 2001:db8::2:3.

/js

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