Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-lear-opsawg-ol-01.txt

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Thu, 27 May 2021 13:47 UTC

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Date: Thu, 27 May 2021 15:47:03 +0200
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Cc: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>, netmod@ietf.org
To: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-lear-opsawg-ol-01.txt
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Hi Juergen,

> On 27 May 2021, at 15:38, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I have not followed the discussion but skimming through the document,
> I felt that calling a grouping an extension is somewhat confusing
> since YANG also has extensions that are a very different thing
> (i.e. we get a clash between a MUD and YANG extensions). Perhaps more
> careful wording can help. In the YANG definitions, I would rather
> avoid using 'extension'.
> 
> OLD
> 
>     grouping ol-extension {
>       description
>         "OL extension grouping";
> 
> NEW
> 
>     grouping owner-licence-grouping {
>       description
>         "A grouping expression ownership and license information";

Thanks, accepted.

Eliot