Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model-05

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model-05
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org>; On Behalf Of Rob Wilton (rwilton)
> Sent: 06 November 2019 11:59
> To: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>;; Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>;;
> netmod@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model-
> 05
> 
> Hi Qin,
> 
> Thanks for the review comments, and apologies for the delayed reply.
> 
> Please see inline ...
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org>; On Behalf Of Qin Wu
> > Sent: 19 August 2019 10:55
> > To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>;; netmod@ietf.org
> > Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-
> model-
> > 05
> >
> > I know the LC has ended. But I have a few suggestion to draft-ietf-
> netmod-
> > sub-intf-vlan-model-05:
> > 1.
> > OLD TEXT:
> > "
> >      import ieee802-dot1q-types {
> >       prefix dot1q-type;
> >      }
> > "
> > NEW TEXT:
> > "
> >      import ieee802-dot1q-types {
> >       prefix dot1q-type;
> >       reference
> >         "IEEE Std 802.1Q-2018: Virtual Bridged Local Area Networks.";
> >      }
> > "
> [RW]
> Yes, I'll fix this.  Although I'll actually use the reference to "IEEE
> 802.3.2-2019".
[RW] 
Oops cut and paste error, this should be to 802.1Qcp-2018 instead.

> 
> > 2. Suggest to add IEEE Std 802.1Q-2018 to normative reference.
> [RW]
> Yes, I'll add this, again to "IEEE 802.3.2-2019".
[RW] 
Ditto.

Thanks,
Rob