Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt

"Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <cwildes@cisco.com> Thu, 17 August 2017 15:17 UTC

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From: "Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <cwildes@cisco.com>
To: "t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com>
CC: "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>, "\"Kent Watsen\"" <kwatsen@juniper.net>
Thread-Topic: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt
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Subject: Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt
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Tom,

I am working with Mahesh to fix the Normative References.

Regarding line length: I am using pyang 1.7.3 which is not complaining about line length in the model. But when I look at the draft I see that both the tree and the model exceed 80 characters. I will make a pass to shorten lines.

Thanks,

Clyde

On 8/17/17, 4:54 AM, "t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:

    Clyde
    
    I like the introduction of yyyy and zzzz;  but I still hanker after
    Normative References to I-Ds,  draft-ietf-netconf-keystore and
    draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server.  I think that they are required.
    
    Also, in -15  and in -16, the line length seems to have gone wrong and
    is now too long; I notice it in the Description clauses.  It was ok
    in -13.
    
    "           Each line must be limited to 72 characters followed by the
               character sequence that denotes an end-of-line (EOL).  This
               limit includes any left-side indentation.
    "
    
    Tom Petch
    
    
    ---- Original Message -----
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    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
    >
    >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Syslog Configuration
    >         Authors         : Clyde Wildes
    >                           Kiran Koushik
    > Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-16.txt
    > Pages           : 30
    > Date            : 2017-08-11
    >
    > Abstract:
    >    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of a
    >    syslog process.  It is intended this model be used by vendors who
    >    implement syslog in their systems.
    >
    > Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
    >
    >    This draft contains many placeholder values that need to be
    replaced
    >    with finalized values at the time of publication.  This note
    >    summarizes all of the substitutions that are needed.  No other RFC
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    >    Artwork in this document contains shorthand references to drafts in
    >    progress.  Please apply the following replacements:
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    >    o  "xxxx" --> the assigned RFC value for
    draft-ietf-netconf-keystore
    >
    >    o  "yyyy" --> the assigned RFC value for draft-ietf-netconf-tls-
    >       client-server
    >
    >    o  "zzzz" --> the assigned RFC value for this draft
    >
    >
    >
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