[netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 (5514)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8342, "Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)". -------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5514 -------------------------------------- Type: Technical Reported by: Rohit R Ranade <rohitrranade@huawei.com> Section: C.1 Original Text ------------- <system xmlns="urn:example:system" xmlns:or="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-origin"> <hostname or:origin="or:learned">bar.example.com</hostname> <interface or:origin="or:intended"> <name>eth0</name> <auto-negotiation> <enabled or:origin="or:default">true</enabled> <speed>1000</speed> </auto-negotiation> <speed>100</speed> <address> <ip>2001:db8::10</ip> <prefix-length>64</prefix-length> </address> <address or:origin="or:learned"> <ip>2001:db8::1:100</ip> <prefix-length>64</prefix-length> </address> </interface> <interface or:origin="or:system"> <name>lo0</name> <address> <ip>::1</ip> <prefix-length>128</prefix-length> </address> </interface> </system> Corrected Text -------------- <system xmlns="urn:example:system" xmlns:or="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-origin" or:origin="or:intended"> <hostname or:origin="or:learned">bar.example.com</hostname> <interface or:origin="or:intended"> <name>eth0</name> <auto-negotiation> <enabled or:origin="or:default">true</enabled> <speed>1000</speed> </auto-negotiation> <speed>100</speed> <address> <ip>2001:db8::10</ip> <prefix-length>64</prefix-length> </address> <address or:origin="or:learned"> <ip>2001:db8::1:100</ip> <prefix-length>64</prefix-length> </address> </interface> <interface or:origin="or:system"> <name>lo0</name> <address> <ip>::1</ip> <prefix-length>128</prefix-length> </address> </interface> </system> Notes ----- There was no "origin" attribute to the "system" top-level container, though it is a configuration node. As per the extension definition "The origin for any top-level configuration data nodes must be specified." To choose an extension for top-level container in such cases, I would prefer one of the origin of its children and used "intended". , instead of "unknown". This has already been discussed in the mail chain, but also mentioned here to help readers in future. Instructions: ------------- This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC8342 (draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10) -------------------------------------- Title : Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) Publication Date : March 2018 Author(s) : M. Bjorklund, J. Schoenwaelder, P. Shafer, K. Watsen, R. Wilton Category : PROPOSED STANDARD Source : Network Modeling Area : Operations and Management Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG
- [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 (551… RFC Errata System
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Robert Wilton
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Andy Bierman
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Andy Bierman
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Robert Wilton
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Robert Wilton
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Andy Bierman
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8342 … Rohit R Ranade