Re: [netmod] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-14: (with COMMENT)

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Murray, see reply inline below.
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主题: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-14: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 2:
* "All security sensitive data (i.e., private keys, passwords, etc.)  SHOULD be overwritten ..." presents a choice.  Why would an implementer not do this? * 
[Qin]: This was outcome of the discussion, see the following link:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/netmod/qrU_71AkP42lnkR6KnfaMsoSgCs/
i.e., folks concerned to restore security data and password to default value, that's we introduce clean requirements to address this concern.
"Implementors SHOULD reboot the device or otherwise restart processes needed to bootstrap it." leads me to the same question.
[Qin]: To make default configuration take effect, the device reboot is recommended, but in some case, the IP address reachability of the device may be lost, therefore bootstrapping may be needed.
Nits:
* "Upon receiving the RPC" is followed by a list, so please add a colon
* "datastores(e.g.," -- add a space after "datastores"

[Qin]: Fixed, thanks.
Section 3:
Nits:
* "The contents of <factory-default> is defined  ..." -- s/is/are/

[Qin]: Fixed, thanks.
Section 5:
* "This document registers one URI in the IETF XML Registry [RFC3688]. ..."
should say explicitly that it's the "ns" sub-registry receiving a new entry.

[Qin]:Okay.