Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-00

Alex Campbell <Alex.Campbell@Aviatnet.com> Fri, 01 December 2017 04:00 UTC

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Hi,

I noticed the table in section 3 has been mangled - it has extra blank lines, entries in the wrong side of the table, and a missing pipe in the bottom right corner.

Apart from that this draft looks good to me.
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Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-00

All,

This starts a two-week working group last call on
draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-00.

Please recall that this update's intention is to
modify the YANG module to be in line with the NMDA
guidelines [1].  Reviewing the diff between the two
drafts [2] should reveal just this.

The working group last call ends on December 12.
Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

[1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dsdt-nmda-guidelines-01
[2] https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-00.txt

Thank you,
Netmod Chairs

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