[nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls WGLC is now closed

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Mon, 16 December 2019 19:22 UTC

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Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2019 14:21:47 -0500
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To: David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com>, Tom Talpey <tom@talpey.com>, "Mkrtchyan, Tigran" <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de>
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Subject: [nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls WGLC is now closed
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Hi-

Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls closed on Friday Dec 13.
I request that the Datatracker recognize completion of Last Call.

Thanks to all who read through the document and posted comments. I've collected
the comments in an updated draft. Here is a diff with rpc-tls-04:

https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls.txt&url2=https://chucklever.github.io/i-d-rpc-tls/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls.txt

David, Tom, could you review these changes and let me know if I've understood
and correctly applied your comments?

Tigran, addressing Tom's comments necessitated a change in Section 5.1.1 to
language that you requested. Please review the changes and let me know if there
is a problem with the new text.

I'm willing to wait until year's end for late comments. If you have anything to
add, please don't hesitate to speak up.


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Chuck Lever