[nfsv4] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layoutwcc-05: (with COMMENT)

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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-nfsv4-layoutwcc-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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** Editorial.  Earlier reference to XDR.  I would have benefited from an
earlier reference to XDR/RFC4506, say in Section 1.1.  Section 3 has XDR
definitions but it isn’t explained to the reader until Section 4 that this is
the underlying format.

** I had a similar question to Deb’s about security considerations.