Re: [nfsv4] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 08 July 2020 14:45 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 08 Jul 2020 10:45:03 -0400
Cc: Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com>, last-call@ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org, nfsv4@ietf.org, draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls.all@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-07
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Dale, thanks for your review. All, thanks for addressing Dale’s comments. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Jun 8, 2020, at 10:12 PM, Dale R. Worley <worley@ariadne.com> wrote:
> 
> Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> writes:
>>> On May 29, 2020, at 9:44 PM, worley@ariadne.com wrote:
>>> These changes look sufficient to me.
>> 
>> Do you mean only the latest rewrite of Section 4.1, or does the above
>> sign-off include the changes proposed in:
>> 
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/nfsv4/z8wyJEalDv2mdMxkeSyaBa7Q7s0/
> 
> Yes, it includes all of the changes resulting from our discussion.
> 
> (But it's excessive to say that I "sign off" on them, as I have no
> authority.  As the review says, "Please treat these comments just like
> any other last call comments.")
> 
> Dale
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