[nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-versioning-10: editorial nits
Mike Kupfer <mike.kupfer@oracle.com> Fri, 26 May 2017 17:30 UTC
Return-Path: <mike.kupfer@oracle.com>
X-Original-To: nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1679B1294B3 for <nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 26 May 2017 10:30:41 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.221
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.221 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, UNPARSEABLE_RELAY=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id DKlWWnmvDLlX for <nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com>; Fri, 26 May 2017 10:30:40 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from aserp1040.oracle.com (aserp1040.oracle.com [141.146.126.69]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1097612946F for <nfsv4@ietf.org>; Fri, 26 May 2017 10:30:40 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from aserv0021.oracle.com (aserv0021.oracle.com [141.146.126.233]) by aserp1040.oracle.com (Sentrion-MTA-4.3.2/Sentrion-MTA-4.3.2) with ESMTP id v4QHUdCS021537 (version=TLSv1 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK) for <nfsv4@ietf.org>; Fri, 26 May 2017 17:30:39 GMT
Received: from aserv0121.oracle.com (aserv0121.oracle.com [141.146.126.235]) by aserv0021.oracle.com (8.13.8/8.14.4) with ESMTP id v4QHUcW9009818 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK) for <nfsv4@ietf.org>; Fri, 26 May 2017 17:30:39 GMT
Received: from abhmp0016.oracle.com (abhmp0016.oracle.com [141.146.116.22]) by aserv0121.oracle.com (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id v4QHUaol027799 for <nfsv4@ietf.org>; Fri, 26 May 2017 17:30:37 GMT
Received: from athyra.us.oracle.com (/10.132.144.95) by default (Oracle Beehive Gateway v4.0) with ESMTP ; Fri, 26 May 2017 10:30:36 -0700
From: Mike Kupfer <mike.kupfer@oracle.com>
To: nfsv4@ietf.org
Date: Fri, 26 May 2017 10:30:35 -0700
Message-ID: <86tw47v83o.fsf@athyra.us.oracle.com>
User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/24.3 (gnu/linux)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain
X-Source-IP: aserv0021.oracle.com [141.146.126.233]
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/nfsv4/AGRPK3YsPYcemfrkf5Mnli3bJ20>
Subject: [nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-versioning-10: editorial nits
X-BeenThere: nfsv4@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: NFSv4 Working Group <nfsv4.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/nfsv4>, <mailto:nfsv4-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/nfsv4/>
List-Post: <mailto:nfsv4@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:nfsv4-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nfsv4>, <mailto:nfsv4-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 26 May 2017 17:30:41 -0000
Section 4.4.2: "When minor version" -> "When the minor version" Section 6: "RFC defining" -> "RFC that defines" mike