[nfsv4] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: (with COMMENT)
Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Thu, 19 April 2018 01:15 UTC
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Subject: [nfsv4] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks to all involved for the work they did on this document. I had the same confusion as Benjamin, and support his discuss. I also found one very small grammar nit in §2: > (file) data: is that part of the file system object which contains > the data to read or written. Change to either "...to read or write." or "...to be read or written."