Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-08: (with COMMENT)
Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Thu, 02 July 2020 18:26 UTC
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls-08: (with COMMENT)
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> On Jul 2, 2020, at 2:08 PM, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > > Chuck, > > On Thu, Jul 2, 2020 at 8:30 AM Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> wrote: >> >> Hi Erik- >> > I was more curious about text for how a TCP RPC server identifies TLS > ClientHello from the first of possibly several unencrypted RPCs after > the 3WHS. And it seems like the same "try to parse a ClientHello else > try to parse an ONC RPC message" is the recommended approach > (analogous to DTLS above)? It was a statement to this effect that I > was after. Understood. I'll propose something in a follow-up e-mail. >> I hope the following change addresses the grammar error you noticed: >> >> OLD: >> >> When operation is complete, an RPC peer terminates a TLS session by >> sending a TLS Closure Alert and may then close the TCP connection. >> >> NEW: >> >> When operation is complete, an RPC peer terminates a TLS session by >> sending a TLS Closure Alert. It may then close the TCP connection. > > I was thinking of something like s/When operation is complete/When all > operations are complete/. > > Sort of related: I'm not sufficiently familiar with RPC over TCP: does > a client ever close a TCP session while there are RPCs in flight (i.e. > as a matter of normal operations and not extraordinary circumstances)? > If so, "... are complete" above might not be strictly correct. I'll > defer to y'all. Either peer is permitted to close a TCP connection while there are outstanding RPC transactions. -- Chuck Lever
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- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Chuck Lever
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Erik Kline
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Chuck Lever
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Erik Kline
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Chuck Lever
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Chuck Lever
- Re: [nfsv4] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ie… Erik Kline