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Re: [nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls WGLC is now closed

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Tue, 17 December 2019 16:22 UTC

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From: Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls WGLC is now closed
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Thanks, Tigran. Will get these fixed up.

> On Dec 17, 2019, at 5:44 AM, Mkrtchyan, Tigran <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de> wrote:
> 
> 
> 
> Hi Chuck,
> 
> looks good to me. Just couple of typos:
> 
> antecedants -> antecedents
> Offloadng -> Offloading
> authentictation -> authentication
> facilites -> facilities
> opportunitic -> opportunistic
> 'entries is to be considered' -> 'entries are to be considered'?
> 
> Thanks for the effort, 
>   Tigran.
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Chuck Lever" <chuck.lever@oracle.com>
>> To: "Dave Noveck" <davenoveck@gmail.com>, "Tom Talpey" <tom@talpey.com>, "Tigran Mkrtchyan" <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de>
>> Cc: "NFSv4" <nfsv4@ietf.org>
>> Sent: Monday, December 16, 2019 8:21:47 PM
>> Subject: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls WGLC is now closed
> 
>> Hi-
>> 
>> Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls closed on Friday Dec 13.
>> I request that the Datatracker recognize completion of Last Call.
>> 
>> Thanks to all who read through the document and posted comments. I've collected
>> the comments in an updated draft. Here is a diff with rpc-tls-04:
>> 
>> https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls.txt&url2=https://chucklever.github.io/i-d-rpc-tls/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-tls.txt
>> 
>> David, Tom, could you review these changes and let me know if I've understood
>> and correctly applied your comments?
>> 
>> Tigran, addressing Tom's comments necessitated a change in Section 5.1.1 to
>> language that you requested. Please review the changes and let me know if there
>> is a problem with the new text.
>> 
>> I'm willing to wait until year's end for late comments. If you have anything to
>> add, please don't hesitate to speak up.
>> 
>> 
>> --
>> Chuck Lever
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