Re: [nfsv4] Working group recharter

David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com> Thu, 27 July 2017 14:32 UTC

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Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 10:32:19 -0400
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Thanks.  Those changes will be in the final draft, which being sent out on
Monday.

On Wed, Jul 26, 2017 at 6:24 PM, Mike Kupfer <mike.kupfer@oracle.com> wrote:

> David Noveck writes:
>
> > I'd like people to look at the current draft and send mail to the list
> > about any issues they see.
>
> I don't have any high-level concerns, just a couple editorial nits.
>
> - General Section, 2nd bullet: maybe add a comma after "related ONC
>   components".
>
> - Extension Section, slide 1, 1st bullet: the wording is a bit awkward.
>   How about
>
>     The NFSv4 protocol is designed to allow extension by the definition
>     of new operations, new attributes, and new pNFS layout types, as
>     well as the creation of minor versions.
>
> cheers,
> mike
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