Return-Path: X-Original-To: nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: nfsv4@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8DADF1200C5 for ; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:25 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.698 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.698 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id V_0gdp58C9GX for ; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:23 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-io0-x234.google.com (mail-io0-x234.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4001:c06::234]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 05423132175 for ; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:21 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-io0-x234.google.com with SMTP id m88so71095669iod.2 for ; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:20 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=19vAcmC5BralyyX3ThTsO7m2KqxIJv9P+hE0DiPJ/Xg=; b=Mo2bkRqFN+D8BJm2UK67kSYUyH9MV9X9FGCZeHFmRYyu5zuPEej1U6dd+bIDfEfyZJ Sl03JHYURnkm1WAzot31jOokvA4DqN7iA/W9wPrTBmrGdCVMrR8v7IURej+xICwE80q6 L1KWeJ32ouJdv3Z4rCvrcjSNKhGIMuE5GylQc3nuJZHxjeRdX6TTR+oDVOHJGgCCZS9s wzoeSWdtXw2sXKiAfCz0EPLun1+b3yn+vRvy3Xb5Yh/Zb3aYblxJVxjy1Ar38t1f3iyL y/j3oncAcrU5G+xhUhtinkNonUPA/Liu83XflAMh1p3dF90e4AN49CGjRwI3T00Q0NPU D4oA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=19vAcmC5BralyyX3ThTsO7m2KqxIJv9P+hE0DiPJ/Xg=; b=igpX/HycWjXtjGTh5w1XSRe9TjQv4pdaa+KpRkKm/Aj6Mn9HtGAvFkDYYb6SAeNCGJ quN6XqcFVVadstSSEUd22hdGc3tZpSUwPOU0S2LlzxgNky8vN0FW7HdyXsFvOwcW4tVP cMulaSdrkKJSgTh7zZaK9cL5E6J9Oa9iUS1WPMR+hhz2tHyIarL97ewr9eUlXTCW+zX7 HafLtLvhqSr2Bg6nPyl8nQ3rSFlifCtgWxmwolW+awfAQLYsV+POfjkfKDd6MP/FRQIy c1C9OBgQ8R+H7ug2LKQ+qOwaT0ntbs6CGm1HMOmgqAi+8f4+tdGj7kiZ4wjzG9/vOYxz Uxcw== X-Gm-Message-State: AIVw112SAbPWJDDYe/Alo74e6WuJ2DYXTNYTkx6ju7LJthaEIJNFHtTL NtJyEAVLeK8fqIfeyXPHvoNBDmNfcQ== X-Received: by 10.107.164.130 with SMTP id d2mr5734716ioj.14.1501165940232; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:20 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.107.142.72 with HTTP; Thu, 27 Jul 2017 07:32:19 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <867eyun8em.fsf@oracle.com> References: <867eyun8em.fsf@oracle.com> From: David Noveck Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 10:32:19 -0400 Message-ID: To: Mike Kupfer Cc: "nfsv4@ietf.org" Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="001a1141bc569dd54905554d6e9b" Archived-At: Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Working group recharter X-BeenThere: nfsv4@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: NFSv4 Working Group List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 14:32:26 -0000 --001a1141bc569dd54905554d6e9b Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Thanks. Those changes will be in the final draft, which being sent out on Monday. On Wed, Jul 26, 2017 at 6:24 PM, Mike Kupfer wrote: > David Noveck writes: > > > I'd like people to look at the current draft and send mail to the list > > about any issues they see. > > I don't have any high-level concerns, just a couple editorial nits. > > - General Section, 2nd bullet: maybe add a comma after "related ONC > components". > > - Extension Section, slide 1, 1st bullet: the wording is a bit awkward. > How about > > The NFSv4 protocol is designed to allow extension by the definition > of new operations, new attributes, and new pNFS layout types, as > well as the creation of minor versions. > > cheers, > mike > > _______________________________________________ > nfsv4 mailing list > nfsv4@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/nfsv4 > --001a1141bc569dd54905554d6e9b Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Thanks.=C2=A0 Those changes will be in the final draft, wh= ich being sent out on Monday.

On Wed, Jul 26, 2017 at 6:24 PM, Mike Kupfer <mike.= kupfer@oracle.com> wrote:
<= span class=3D"">David Noveck writes:

> I'd like people to look at the current draft and send mail to the = list
> about any issues they see.

I don't have any high-level concerns, just a couple editorial ni= ts.

- General Section, 2nd bullet: maybe add a comma after "related ONC =C2=A0 components".

- Extension Section, slide 1, 1st bullet: the wording is a bit awkward.
=C2=A0 How about

=C2=A0 =C2=A0 The NFSv4 protocol is designed to allow extension by the defi= nition
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 of new operations, new attributes, and new pNFS layout types,= as
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 well as the creation of minor versions.

cheers,
mike

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