[nfsv4] Review comment for WGLC of draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types
Matt Benjamin <mbenjami@redhat.com> Wed, 16 August 2017 18:25 UTC
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Hi, I had one comment on the draft. In section 2 "Definitions" and again in section 2.1 on the distinction between Data Server and "storage device," it appears that we should have something like "access via the NFS protocol" for "access via a file-based protocol." Sorry for the limited scope of this review. Matt
- [nfsv4] Review comment for WGLC of draft-ietf-nfs… Matt Benjamin