Re: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data-06.txt

Chuck Lever <chucklever@gmail.com> Thu, 02 January 2020 14:58 UTC

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> On Jan 2, 2020, at 9:52 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network File System Version 4 WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : RDMA Connection Manager Private Data For RPC-Over-RDMA Version 1
>        Author          : Charles Lever
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 12
> 	Date            : 2020-01-02
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document specifies the format of RDMA-CM Private Data exchanged
>   between RPC-over-RDMA version 1 peers as part of establishing a
>   connection.  The addition of the private data payload specified in
>   this document is an optional extension that does not alter the RPC-
>   over-RDMA version 1 protocol.  This document updates RFC 8166.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data-06
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data-06
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data-06
> 
> 
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In preparation for IETF Last Call, this revision captures the changes
made as a result of Expert Review. I reconfirmed via the list archive
that Dave and Tom are both OK with the new text.

As an additional clean-up, I've re-ordered the IANA and Security
Considerations sections to the usual sequence of Security first, then
IANA.


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Chuck Lever
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