Re: [nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Thu, 02 January 2020 22:32 UTC

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From: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 02 Jan 2020 16:33:38 -0600
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To: David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03
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Very well.  Thank you for attending to this.
Cheers,
- vijay

On Thu, Jan 2, 2020 at 4:28 PM David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com> wrote:

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> On Thu, Jan 2, 2020 at 3:09 PM Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
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>> Dear David: Thanks for addressing my comments.  Regarding not being able
>> to see long lines as I report below, please see the attached screenshot
>> corresponding to the "htmlized" version of the draft.
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>> I see it now.   The same thing happens in the  "htmlized" version of
> rfc5661.   This is due to a very long title within a reference to an open
> group spec with xml2rfc deciding to reproduce this title in full in the
> link and doing so without line folding.   I feel both are bugs but I'm sure
> the second is a bug.  I was able to get around this by adding "abbrev='Open
> Group'" to the <title> element.   The result looks reasonable to me but the
> rfc editor might decide it is wrong in some way.
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