[nfsv4] Review comments for WGLC of draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Fri, 04 August 2017 18:49 UTC

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Subject: [nfsv4] Review comments for WGLC of draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files
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This document appears to be mature and ready for publication.
Just a handful of housekeeping observations:

The material in sections 1.1 and 1.2 appears to be the same or
nearly the same as the material in Section 2 in
draft-ietf-nfsv4-pnfs-layout. It would be nice if flex-files
could reference that document instead of including the repeated
material.

Section 3.1: the code copyright is 2012. Should it be updated
to 2017, or perhaps 2012-2017 ?

Has it been confirmed that the XDR code contained in the most
recent revision of this document compiles with rpcgen?


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Chuck Lever