[nfsv4] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-03
Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 18 December 2019 00:17 UTC
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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-?? Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2019-12-17 IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-25 IESG Telechat date: 2019-12-19 I have reviewed about 1/2 of the I-D, up to Section 12 (page 297). I will review the remaining 1/2 before the telchat, but I suspect that given my very high level overview of the draft, my disposition will not change. Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. In the portion of the draft I reviewed, there are some minor nits that can easily be fixed. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 4 ("Sn" means Section n): 1/ Appendix A: s/No correesponding explanation/No corresponding explanation/ 2/ S1: s/authoritative complete/authoritatively complete/ 3/ S1.7 (page 12): "associable" or "associated to" 4/ There are many long lines that go beyond 80 characters, see S1.9, the bullet that starts with “o Open files can be …”, Table 1, S4.2.1, etc. Thanks, - vijay
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