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Re: [nfsv4] [PATCH] Rewording of XDR instructions

David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com> Tue, 29 August 2017 18:01 UTC

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From: David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2017 14:01:29 -0400
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To: Thomas Haynes <thomas.haynes@primarydata.com>, "J. Bruce Fields" <bfields@fieldses.org>, spencer shepler <spencer.shepler@gmail.com>, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] [PATCH] Rewording of XDR instructions
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Looks good to me.  Now that Tom has done the patch with the agreed-upon
changes, it is just a matter
of Bruce turning whatever crank needs to be turned and submitting -05,
assuming the Spencers approve of a new version being submitted now.
Currently the document is stuck in a bogus MISSREF   Once that is cleared
up, the document will be in the hands of the RFC editor and submitting a
new version
might be more disruptive.


On Tue, Aug 29, 2017 at 1:04 PM, Thomas Haynes <
Thomas.Haynes@primarydata.com> wrote:

> From: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
>
> Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
> ---
>  umask_middle_xdr.xml | 13 +++++++------
>  1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/umask_middle_xdr.xml b/umask_middle_xdr.xml
> index f6450e9..9e900ea 100644
> --- a/umask_middle_xdr.xml
> +++ b/umask_middle_xdr.xml
> @@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
>
>  <section anchor="xdr" title="XDR Extraction">
>    <t>
> -    The external data representation (XDR)
> +    The additional lines of external data representation (XDR)
>      <xref target='RFC4506' /> description
>      embedded in this document can be extracted
> -    into a ready-to-compile by feeding this document
> +    by feeding this document
>      into the following shell script:
>    </t>
>
> @@ -42,10 +42,11 @@ sh extract.sh &lt; umask.txt &gt; umask.x
>    </t>
>
>    <t>
> -    Note that the XDR code contained in this document depends on
> -    types from the NFSv4.2 nfs42_prot.x file <xref target='RFC7863' />.
> -    As such, the reader will need to add the generated XDR to
> -    that from <xref target='RFC7863' />.
> +    Once that extraction is done, these added lines need to be
> +    inserted into an appropiate base XDR of the generated
> +    XDR from <xref target="RFC7863">, together with XDR from
> +    any additional extensions to be recognized by the implementation.
> +    This will result in a ready-to compile XDR file.
>    </t>
>
>  </section>
> --
> 2.3.6
>
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