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Re: [nfsv4] Request for WG Last Call

"Mkrtchyan, Tigran" <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de> Tue, 25 July 2017 08:14 UTC

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Date: Tue, 25 Jul 2017 10:13:57 +0200
From: "Mkrtchyan, Tigran" <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de>
To: Thomas Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
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Hi Tom, 

some typos: 

page 6: 
" A client presenting the 
wrong credential for the deisred access will get a NFS4ERR_ACCESS 
error." deisred -> desired 

page 7: 
"that would never be used to grant acccess." acccess -> access 

page 9: 
"OPEN_DOWNGRADE and CLOSE only require local execution on the 
metadata sever." sever -> server 

page 10: 
"2.3.2. Tighly Coupled Locking Model" Tighly -> Tightly 

"of the association between the metadata-sever-chosen stateid and" metadata-sever-chosen -> metadata-server-chosen 
"device aware of the association between the metadata-sever-chosen" metadata-sever-chosen -> metadata-server-chosen 

page 11: 
"rather than only to daya storage device that contain the locked" daya -> data 

page 19: 
" If an implementation needs a different statedid per file handle, then" statedid -> stateid 

page 20: 
" if the client could determine that there was a network diconnect" diconnect -> disconnect 

page 24: 
"client's responsibility with resepect to COMMIT is explained in" resepect -> respect 

page 36: 
"modifying the syntethic uid or gid on the data file." syntethic -> synthetic 

Regards, 
Tigran. 

> From: "Thomas Haynes" <loghyr@primarydata.com>
> To: "NFSv4" <nfsv4@ietf.org>
> Sent: Thursday, July 20, 2017 1:57:32 PM
> Subject: [nfsv4] Request for WG Last Call

> One of my AIs from the IETF meeting was to inform the WG that I wanted the
> following two documents to be in WGLC:

> [ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files/ |
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files/ ] - draft 12
> [ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types/ |
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types/ ] - draft 05

> So this is that request...

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