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Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> writes:
>> On May 29, 2020, at 9:44 PM, worley@ariadne.com wrote:
>> These changes look sufficient to me.
>
> Do you mean only the latest rewrite of Section 4.1, or does the above
> sign-off include the changes proposed in:
>
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/nfsv4/z8wyJEalDv2mdMxkeSyaBa7Q7s0/

Yes, it includes all of the changes resulting from our discussion.

(But it's excessive to say that I "sign off" on them, as I have no
authority.  As the review says, "Please treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.")

Dale

