Re: [nfsv4] Changes in versioning-08

[Mike Kupfer <[e-mail]>]

David Noveck wrote:

> > * First page, third line ("Updates: ....").  Should "(if approved)"
> > go away?
> 
> It will eventually but normally this happens when the RFC is published.
> xml2rfc generates it.

Ah, okay.  Thanks for explaining about xml2rfc.

> > This is sort of covered already by text near the end of Section
> > 4.4.3 ("A determination of the knowledge..."), but
> > reiterating it here in Section 6 seems like it would be helpful.
> 
> OK. The paragraph now reads:
> 
> Additions to the set of callback requests and extensions to the XDR for
> existing callback operations can only be made if the server can determine,
> based on the client's actions, that that client is aware of the changes.
> This determination, for any particular client (as defined by its clientid),
> is made before sending those new or extended callbacks.

I think that should be sufficient.

thanks,
mike