[nfsv4] [PATCH] Rewording of XDR instructions

Thomas Haynes <Thomas.Haynes@primarydata.com> Tue, 29 August 2017 17:04 UTC

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Subject: [nfsv4] [PATCH] Rewording of XDR instructions
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From: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>

Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
---
 umask_middle_xdr.xml | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/umask_middle_xdr.xml b/umask_middle_xdr.xml
index f6450e9..9e900ea 100644
--- a/umask_middle_xdr.xml
+++ b/umask_middle_xdr.xml
@@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
 
 <section anchor="xdr" title="XDR Extraction">
   <t>
-    The external data representation (XDR)
+    The additional lines of external data representation (XDR)
     <xref target='RFC4506' /> description 
     embedded in this document can be extracted
-    into a ready-to-compile by feeding this document
+    by feeding this document
     into the following shell script:
   </t>
 
@@ -42,10 +42,11 @@ sh extract.sh &lt; umask.txt &gt; umask.x
   </t>
 
   <t>
-    Note that the XDR code contained in this document depends on
-    types from the NFSv4.2 nfs42_prot.x file <xref target='RFC7863' />.
-    As such, the reader will need to add the generated XDR to
-    that from <xref target='RFC7863' />.
+    Once that extraction is done, these added lines need to be
+    inserted into an appropiate base XDR of the generated
+    XDR from <xref target="RFC7863">, together with XDR from
+    any additional extensions to be recognized by the implementation.
+    This will result in a ready-to compile XDR file.
   </t>
 
 </section>
-- 
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