Re: [nfsv4] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.txt

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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.txt
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On Fri, Nov 26, 2021 at 10:34:53AM -0500, David Noveck wrote:
> This new version includes:
> 
>    - A modified definition of NFSERR_NOTSUPP to address the issue of some
>    file systems not supporting an OPTIONAL operation even though the server as
>    a whole provides support.  This has been discussed on the list.

Looks good to me.  There are some typos in section 19.1.1.5.  I think
you mean to say "file system on which it is issued"?  But maybe
"affected file system" or "filesystem operated on" would be better.

--b.

>    - Fixes for all of the remaining easy errata reports that I had planned
>    to do a few months ago.
> 
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> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Date: Thu, Nov 25, 2021, 8:49 AM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.txt
> To: David Noveck <davenoveck@gmail.com>
> 
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.txt
> has been successfully submitted by David Noveck and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:           draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis
> Revision:       03
> Title:          Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1 Protocol
> Document date:  2021-11-25
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          668
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis/
> Html:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03.html
> Htmlized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis
> Diff:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-dnoveck-nfsv4-rfc5661bis-03
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the Network File System (NFS) version 4 minor
>    version 1, including features retained from the base protocol (NFS
>    version 4 minor version 0, which is specified in RFC 7530) and
>    protocol extensions made subsequently.  The later minor version has
>    no dependencies on NFS version 4 minor version 0, and was, until
>    recently, documented as a completely separate protocol.
> 
>    This document will give rise to a suite of documents which
>    collectively obsolete RFC 8881.  In addition to many corrections and
>    clarifications, it will rely on NFSv4-wide documents to substantially
>    revise the treatment of protocol extension, internationalization, and
>    security, superseding the descriptions of those aspects of the
>    protocol appearing in RFCs 5661 and 8881.
> 
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