[nfsv4] Verified editorial Errata on 5561 and sesqui-msns

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Wed, 29 July 2020 09:01 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [nfsv4] Verified editorial Errata on 5561 and sesqui-msns
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Hi Authors and WG

 

This relates to the ongoing AUTH48 for draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns

 

I got a question from the RFC-editor about some of the errata filed on RFC
5561. These where two errata that are editorial and verified. They are
basically typos or other very basic issues but of potential importance to
understanding. And maybe we should include these change into this document
instead of continue to confuse the reader. However looking in the Errata
list there are more that of this basic type but wasn't obvious in the copy
editing. 

 

The Errata that I think falls into this category are:

 

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid3558

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2062

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2249

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2280

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2324

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2330

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2548

 

So the above ones is the ones I wonder if we simply should have the
RFC-editor apply before publication? I think this is simply correcting
things that the WG knows are wrong in RFC5661 and it could help the reader.
I am aware of this is not following what was previous said about Errata, but
I think this category should have been included as they appear very straight
forward and have been previously classified as relevant for understanding
and have risk of causing implementation errors. If the WG participants think
we should stick with previous path and not include them I will listen.
However, take a look at them before you make that assessment. 

 

 

There are two Errata that are listed as editorial and verified that are not
straight forward nor necessary only editorial

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid2328

This appears to an Error code that is missing in RFC5661 and should be
listed in Section 15.1.16. This doesn't have text that can just be applied.

 

https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4215

This Errata appears to fix a unclear statement in fourth paragraph of
Section 22.2. However, I don't see this as Editorial as it changes the IANA
procedure even if what is currently written is confusing. 

 

So these I would leave for the proper bis to take care of.

 

Cheers

 

Magnus Westerlund