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Thomas Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com> Tue, 25 July 2017 18:26 UTC

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From: Thomas Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
To: Tigran Mkrtchyan <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de>
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Hi Tigran,

Thanks and as a fyi to all of you draft authors: https://tools.ietf.org/tools/idspell/webservice is nice, I know I should have used it more. :-)

Tom

On Jul 25, 2017, at 1:13 AM, Mkrtchyan, Tigran <tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de<mailto:tigran.mkrtchyan@desy.de>> wrote:

Hi Tom,

some typos:

   page 6:
  " A client presenting the
   wrong credential for the deisred access will get a NFS4ERR_ACCESS
   error."  deisred -> desired

 page 7:
   "that would never be used to grant acccess."  acccess -> access

 page 9:
  "OPEN_DOWNGRADE and CLOSE only require local execution on the
      metadata sever."   sever -> server

 page 10:
 "2.3.2.  Tighly Coupled Locking Model"  Tighly -> Tightly

 "of the association between the metadata-sever-chosen stateid and" metadata-sever-chosen -> metadata-server-chosen
"device aware of the association between the metadata-sever-chosen" metadata-sever-chosen -> metadata-server-chosen

 page 11:
  "rather than only to daya storage device that contain the locked" daya -> data

 page 19:
 " If an implementation needs a different statedid per file handle, then"  statedid -> stateid

 page 20:
 " if the client could determine that there was a network diconnect" diconnect -> disconnect

page 24:
 "client's responsibility with resepect to COMMIT is explained in"  resepect -> respect

 page 36:
  "modifying the syntethic uid or gid on the data file." syntethic -> synthetic

Regards,
   Tigran.

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From: "Thomas Haynes" <loghyr@primarydata.com<mailto:loghyr@primarydata.com>>
To: "NFSv4" <nfsv4@ietf.org<mailto:nfsv4@ietf.org>>
Sent: Thursday, July 20, 2017 1:57:32 PM
Subject: [nfsv4] Request for WG Last Call
One of my AIs from the IETF meeting was to inform the WG that I wanted the following two documents to be in WGLC:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-flex-files/ - draft 12
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types/ - draft 05

So this is that request...

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