Re: [Nfvrg] FW: Research Group Preparation (a.k.a. "Last Call") for draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps-network-virtualization

["Jose Saldana" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Carlos,

Thank you very much for the draft.

Some minor details about it:

- dot missing: "the environment in which VNFs are deployed"

- "entities via an interface.Interfaces, when local," there is a blank space missing.

- "integrating MEC capabilities with service providers networks," could say "service providers' networks"

- Perhaps a link to the DMTF web could be included in 3.5.

- "transport layer protocols (e.g., TCP, UPD)" should say UDP.

- I would add a comma here: "that started in 1997 it does not have a charter", i.e. "that started in 1997, it does not have a charter"

- "Lately, there are also some efforts lately lookinh into VNF" could say "Lately, there are also some efforts looking into VNF"


Best regards,

Jose

> -----Mensaje original-----
> De: Nfvrg [mailto:[e-mail]] En nombre de Carlos Jesús Bernardos
> Cano
> Enviado el: martes, 30 de mayo de 2017 18:04
> Para: Fabio Giust <[e-mail]>rg>; [e-mail]
> Asunto: Re: [Nfvrg] FW: Research Group Preparation (a.k.a. "Last Call") for draft-
> irtf-nfvrg-gaps-network-virtualization
> 
> Hi Fabio,
> 
> Thanks for your review. Regarding your point about Section 4.4, I agree with that.
> We'll add text to address it in the next revision.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Carlos
> 
> On Tue, 2017-05-30 at 14:31 +0200, Fabio Giust wrote:
> > Hi all,
> >
> > I have gone through the whole document, and I don't have major
> > comments except for the following.
> >
> > In Section 4.4 Multiple domains, would it make sense to mention
> > something about "integration/harmonization of different management
> > domains"? A key example comes from Mobile Edge Computing, which,
> > according to ETSI, comes with its own "MANO" system, but the example
> > can be generalized to other similar cases.
> >
> > Kind regards,
> > Fabio
> >
> > >
> > >
> > > From: Nfvrg [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of Diego R.
> > > Lopez
> > > Sent: 28 April 2017 18:14
> > > To: [e-mail]
> > > Subject: [Nfvrg] Research Group Preparation (a.k.a. "Last Call") for
> > > draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps-network-virtualization
> > >
> > > Hi,
> > >
> > > As discussed and agreed in our meeting in Chicago, this message is
> > > to open the equivalent of a last-call for our draft on NFV research
> > > challenges (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nfvrg-gaps-
> > > network-virtualization/). Note I use the term “equivalent to last-
> > > call”, as the IRTF process described in RFC 5743 uses the term
> > > “Research Group Preparation”. Let me remind you the summarized IRTF
> > > process as described in RFC 5743:
> > >    o  The Research Group (RG) performs a thorough technical and
> > >       editorial review of the document and agrees it should be
> > >       published.
> > >
> > >    o  The Internet Research Steering Group (IRSG) reviews the
> > > document
> > >       and approves it for publication.
> > >    o  The Internet Engineering Steering Group (IESG) reviews the
> > >       document to assure that there are no conflicts with current or
> > >       expected standardization activities.
> > >
> > >    o  The document is submitted to the RFC Editor for publication.
> > > So we are starting the first step above, and all of you are
> > > encouraged to review the document and share your comments and
> > > opinions about moving it forward towards publication. Since it is
> > > advisable to put a deadline for this kind of process, let’s go for a
> > > one month period, that is until the 28th May.
> > >
> > > Be goode,
> > >
> > > --
> > > "Esta vez no fallaremos, Doctor Infierno"
> > >
> > > Dr Diego R. Lopez
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