Re: [nmrg] call for adoption as RG document : draft-francois-nmrg-ai-challenges

Hi,

I am not sure what happened to the RG adoption of this I-D. But FWIW I do
support it!  I have some minor comments while reading -

(1) It is unusual to see SHOULD in the abstract. I suggest keeping that for
the body of the draft and not abstract. Also expand AI, NM on first use in
the abstract.

(2) Expand on first use - ML, SVM, ANN, SDN, MILP, VNF, SFC. Some of these
might also benefit from informative references if easily available.

(3) If we talk about human bias in "..guided by an AI system to avoid human
bias"; I wonder if we need to also acknowledge the inherent bias that can
also exist in AI.

(4) Section 3 formatting is off!

(5) s/combinzatorially/combinatorially/

(6) Add reference for BPF

(7) s/This leads so the/This leads to the/

(8) Add reference to Intent and IBN as well as for the text around Alpha
Go. Also digital twin!

(9) Please expand on Security Consideration. I also suggest having an
explicit Privacy Consideration section as well

Thanks!
Dhruv

On Wed, Jan 18, 2023 at 1:41 PM Laurent Ciavaglia (Nokia) <
laurent.ciavaglia@nokia.com> wrote:

> Dear NMRG,
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> This message starts the call for adoption as RG document for:
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> Research Challenges in Coupling Artificial Intelligence and Network Management - draft-francois-nmrg-ai-challenges
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-francois-nmrg-ai-challenges/
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> Please let us know if you support or not the work becoming a RG document.
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> In all cases, provide detailed comments to support your opinion and send them on the mailing list.
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> We are particularly interested in assessing the following aspects:
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> 1.    NMRG being a *research* group it is important to articulate well the problem(s), challenge(s) and research questions.
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> 2.    Is the scientific soundness of the draft satisfying? (quality of the scientific proposition, rigor of the method, impact) ; "the measure of success is the quality and impact of the research results" [RFC2014]
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> The procedure for RG document adoption and important criteria are detailed here: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/nmrg/CVEyLUvfxJk1Ud5WdM9Y5LGvQmU
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> The call for adoption is open for two weeks and ends on February 1st, 2023.
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> Best regards, NMRG chairs
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> Laurent & Jérôme
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