Re: [nmrg] I-D Action: draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08.txt

Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com> Thu, 08 June 2017 16:52 UTC

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Hi all, 

We posted an updated draft in response to the  review comments that were received.  

The changes are as follows:  

- We have extended the abstract.
- We have extended the AN acronym and added RFC 7575 as reference
- We updated section 4 with additional explanatory text to mention that there is potentially a budget with regards to the total amount of measurement traffic on the network, and explaining that however in general the gating factor will be the resource budget at the network device, because it is the one that has to generate the synthetic test traffic, receive the traffic that is reflected back in response, and assess the service levels.  
- We have expanded text in section 5
- We have updated section 5 on user and administrator experience.  
- We have renamed section 7 "Implementation Considerations".  
- We have overhauled section 12 (Security Considerations).  

Kind regards
--- Alex (on behalf of coauthors)


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Subject: [nmrg] I-D Action: draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network Management of the IETF.

        Title           : Autonomic Networking Use Case for Distributed Detection of SLA Violations
        Authors         : Jeferson Campos Nobre
                          Lisandro Zambenedetti Granvile
                          Alexander Clemm
                          Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
	Filename        : draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08.txt
	Pages           : 13
	Date            : 2017-06-07

Abstract:
   This document describes a use case for autonomic networking
   concerning monitoring of Service Level Agreements (SLAs).  The use
   case aims to detect violations of SLAs in distributed fashion,
   striving to optimize the autonomic deployment of active measurement
   probes in a way that maximizes the likelihood of detecting service
   level violations without any outside guidance or intervention.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-nmrg-autonomic-sla-violation-detection-08


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