Re: [Ntp] [Last-Call] Antw: [EXT] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-yang-data-model-12

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Tue, 16 February 2021 09:49 UTC

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Dhruv

This thread makes me think that s.8 could do with
Note: '\' line folding as per [RFC8792]

Tom Petch

On 15/02/2021 17:15, Tim Evens (tievens) wrote:
> Thanks, that makes sense.
>
> On 2/15/21, 4:01 AM, "tom petch" <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote:
>
>
> On 15/02/2021 08:54, Ulrich Windl wrote:
>>>>> Tim Evens via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> schrieb am 13.02.2021 um 00:51
>> in
>> Nachricht <161317387496.31377.7416127213693172983@ietfa.amsl.com>:
>>
>> ...
>>> Are the backslashes required here? It seems that many examples have them
>>> when
>>> there is a value and the closing tag is not on the same line.  For example:
>> ...
>>>              <associations‑address>192.0.2.1\
>>>              </associations‑address>
>>
>> I think the backslash is no syntactic element IN XML; it's probably an
>> indoicator that those lines should be ONE for XML input.
>> Some XML lines are just long...
>
>
> Backslash is a YANG convention where lines have been folded to fit the
> rules of the RFC Editor but YANG/XML does not want them folded.
>
> This is usually accompanied with a reference to
> draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding RFC8792
>
> Tom Petch
>
>>
>> Regards,
>> Ulrich
>>
>>